Tuesday, December 29, 2009

Here I Am

Red lights dance
   across the barren planes
A steady stream of galvanization;
   a disarray of action
In triads they call to one another:
   "Here I am!”

And together they are alone
   singing in silence


  1. I'm moving to North Dakota on Jan, 2nd.
    Going to Trinity Bible College in Ellendale! haha
    I like your poem by the way. Quite nice. Simple and yet has a bit of emotion to it. nice.

  2. I tend to think I wrote one in a similar style while driving through Kansas this summer... I can't find it though. :(

    I really enjoy, though, how the whole thing can be taken as tranquil and contented, or the last two lines can make it seem very lonely, kinda sad.
    Cool. :)

  3. Mmmmmm, I like your writing. Nice style.

  4. Liking my poem!! :) haha thanks...I don't write them often.