tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3999802583958726804.post768369271634036831..comments2010-09-05T09:30:43.336-07:00Comments on Grizzly Factory: Recent CognitionsGrizLeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06581925846463415559noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3999802583958726804.post-35728157852230662962010-05-16T21:18:36.287-07:002010-05-16T21:18:36.287-07:00Your a good writer.Your a good writer.Becky Levesquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01137899963383757113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3999802583958726804.post-49347675334874854632010-05-02T20:47:43.707-07:002010-05-02T20:47:43.707-07:00Merveilleux! Les recits de ses voyages sont intere...Merveilleux! Les recits de ses voyages sont interessants... The first is my favourite. It feels finished - I wouldn't change a thing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03138290117600362204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3999802583958726804.post-47862833286755809872010-04-13T20:01:05.411-07:002010-04-13T20:01:05.411-07:00I know that poets shouldn't have to explain th...I know that poets shouldn't have to explain their poetry<br /><br />Luckily for me<br />I am not a poet.<br />... See More<br />So I would like to say a few things to help you ruminate on my musings:<br /><br />There used to be a mouse problem in the house I live in right now. It's less of a problem now... but I became a master at laying traps and killing these tiny creatures in what was usually a quick and (humane?) death. Ask Kelsey about the time the mouse didn't die.<br /><br />Anyway. It got me thinking about the trap of sin and how we always end up falling for it. Snap.<br /><br />Next, I would like to acquit myself of Tarnish. It was done in reflection of me being hurt. It wasn't fun. So I decided, instead of whining about it in some poem, I'd write about it in first person, as the person who hurt me. Sharing it because if this person is you (and don't pretend it's not! I know someone reading this will be this person) then stop. Seriously. The only person you're fooling is yourself, if you're lucky.<br /><br />Oh, and one more thing, the ones I didn't say anything about above are the ones that I think are the better of the four. Ha.GrizLeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06581925846463415559noreply@blogger.com